(Irina's story: A woman walks through New York on a Saturday morning, shopping, eating, drinking. In the evening, she ends up at a cafe eating olives and red wine and gets a call/message from a man. She waits for him.)
As you wait for him—no, you are not waiting for him. You haven’t waited for him since the end of September. Still, your fingers remember how to pick at the pale grey polish on your nails and you feel the minutes passing, silent and slow.
You choose a fat, purple olive. Its flesh is sour and salty and you savor it. You roll the pit with your tongue, you dare it to break the skin of the roof of your mouth.
As a trumpet hovers again above the hum of early evening, the door of the bar opens with a whine and silences it. You wonder if it's him and you smell the sugar and the pine of his skin, the sweat and the warm air he used to carry after biking across town.
You look, it is not him. You leave the bar and begin to walk. A drummer busks a block ahead and when you fall into rhythm with him, your heels hit the concrete with the control of a metronome. You let New York carry you.
I read this again, and it's not perfect, I want to change it, but I am so excited about New York.